User:Ezacarias01/Foreplay/YamilBar Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Ezacarias01)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ezacarias01/sandbox


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Foreplay

Evaluate the drafted changes
Definition: Maybe take out "This is typically the reason why" to make it more direct but overall perfectly good addition

Role: Really good and thorough expansion into the physical and psychological effects of roleplay and with good sources.

Techniques: Maybe take out parts that may be subjective like "it is a great way to increase sexual tension and stimulate sexual desire for intercourse" as these things could have varying value from person to person but the rest is well formatted and cited.

History: Very informative and potentially helpful to married couples and I like that it maintains a level of objectivity and uses facts from literature, good job!