User:Ezra kucur/Pre-Clovis/Lulj2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ezra kucur


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ezra%20kucur/Pre-Clovis?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Clovis culture

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think your lead is good--it's broad enough to introduce the reader to what the article is about, but provides some details. I think the small sections you have added between the already present article are very helpful, as they either provide a little more information, or they provide transitions from one topic to the next. Overall, the organization of the article is logical and clear, and I don't see any places that need to be moved around. I know you're not done with the section about megafaunal migration, so you might already be doing this, but one thing I would like to see in that is an explanation of what megafaunal is. Maybe it's commonly known among the science community, but probably not everyone who reads this article knows what it is. Another area you could maybe add would be in the coastal migration route section--for instance, are scientists doing anything to preserve artifacts that might soon be covered with water? Are they rushing to excavate them, or do they not care because there are so many sites? Not sure if there is information on this, but it was something I was wondering about. Your references look good, I checked a few and they worked. In general, I think your additions have improved the article, and there's not a lot of errors/things I'd like to see changed. Good job!