User:Ezra kucur/Settlement of the Americas/CarsonSawatzke Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I am reviewing Ezra kucur's work on the Settlement of the Americas.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * - Link to Eza's Sandbox Draft


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Settlement of the Americas

Evaluate the drafted changes
In the Sandbox Draft, I noticed that the editor focused their additions and edits primarily on chronology and sources of migration during the settlement of the Americas. The editor changed the wording of sentences and combined pieces of information to make the article not only sound grammatically correct but also have a stronger sense of flow and connection between sentences.

The new section of original content, "Megafaunal Migrations", is a very strong and extremely well-written piece. The added information is clear, neutral, supported by multiple sources, and adds quality to the article. It is apparent that the editor was concise in their articulation of this new section of information and the combination of reliable sources adds to the strength of the new information as well.

An addition that could be made to strengthen the overall appeal of the article is the addition of an image. Many of the other sections in the article possess an image to further explain the information represented in their section. The section on "Megafaunal Migrations" could simply include an image of a large mammalian or an image further detailing radiocarbon dating.

Overall, I enjoyed reviewing the additions and edits made to this article, the newly added section is clear and concise, a strong addition to the article.