User:F1287/Avian malaria/Sarahlujoseph Peer Review

General info
F1287
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:F1287/Avian_malaria?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Avian malaria

Evaluate the drafted changes
This is a great start to editing this wiki. Although there is a lot of information in the existing article, I think it was smart to focus on its history, as that is what I assume you are doing. I think focusing on the history will add depth to the article. If you consider to go more in depth on history, I would advise you discuss more about Dr. Ross' history and his impact on avian malaria. In addition to history, have you thought about adding potential symptoms and signs of the disease? It may be useful to consider other aspects that could be added, as this article mainly focuses on the virus itself, so adding information about the disease and how it is prevented/contracted may also be helpful. It would be helpful to consider using more sources as well. Google scholar has great scholarly resources for this article that can be used as a starting point.