User:F98321/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Anhui

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I'm from Anhui and it's interesting to see more information and others' thoughts about it. Also it is easier for me to evaluate these information with my own experience. I believe the article is well written, except some minor problems.

Evaluate the article
· The first part of the passage is well-written: the first paragraph and the catalog give readers a straightforward and conclusive overview of the province. It doesn't digress from the topic and contains any unrelated information. The first paragraph contains mainly the basic information of Anhui, such as its location and population.

· The information in this part is relevant to the main point of the passage. Some parts are detailed and accurate, like the history of Anhui. However, the article doesn't pay much attention to its education, technology, and religion, all of which are proud of Anhui people. Anhui has one of the greatest universities in China, University of Science and Technology of China, and its capital is a leading scientific research city ranked as 6th in China and top 20th in the world. Jiuhuashan, one of the four most famous Buddhist sacred lands in China. Also some information, like those about economic growth, seems out-of-date. The passage can write much more about these.

· The whole passage is well-organized - different information is in their own part, and the catalog can help readers understand the whole structure. The article is well-written, as I can seldom see grammar errors and vocabularies are not obscure.

· The article uses many images, including the maps and buildings of Anhui. To use the photos of these public buildings are not considered to violate the copyright of others.

· This part mainly includes the editions of its content, including deleting information about robot production lines. The passage is listed as a level-5 vital article and as part of Wikiproject China.

· The article is well-organized and contains enough details for readers to learn about Anhui. However, some information is not comprehensive, as I mention in the "Content" part, which needs further improvements.