User:FCollins95/Sex reversal/JermicaJ Peer Review

Peer Review: Sex reversal is an article on sex reversal in varies species and the processes that go into its reversal wether through the process of genetic determination through the basis of genetics and/or through evolution and its environmental factors. Each group member has made at least 4 edits. All edits have contributed substantially however edits and more information under the bird category could be a little more in depth in similarity to all the other categories that are being mentioned. The article has great edits and information on sub topics/species.It would be great to make sure there is flow with the article and each sub topic has evenly distributed thorough information, for example the bird and mammal sub topics. Overall great start on article and edits.

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