User:FML09/NGOs in West Africa/MathewLJohnson Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?Assigned to: FML09, Fisheralicia0


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:FML09/NGOs_in_West_Africa?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * NGOs in West Africa

Evaluate the drafted changes
This is a good outline. The scope is quite broad, but there is a large content gap to fill. I like the structure and organization of the article -- splitting up national and international organizations. Additionally, the writing is clear and neutral; and the sources seem reliable.

There are a lot of organizations listed. A question I would ask is if it is better to give a lot of detail to a few organizations or just a bit of detail to many? I admire the scope of the project, but it does seem to be a lot -- just talking about the presence and role of human rights organizations in West Africa seems to be a hefty task.

While I admire the ambitions behind it, this seems like it could use a bit more of a narrow focus. Going through all of these organizations and talking about the history, the prominent figures, and their actions is going to take a lot of time. Nevertheless, great work!