User:FadGadgetTovey/Marine Restoration/Camillemarie222 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

FadGadgetTovey (provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:FadGadgetTovey/Marine Restoration
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The intro to this article is great, I would just say to list more of the reasons for Marine degradation and maybe go into small detail about why this happens. This is a good start to the introduction of the topic, and the source given about oxygen the ocean provides is a great one.

The methods section is an awesome start and outline of what is going to be covered. Obviously you could go into more detail about the process of carbon capture and why coral reefs are so important, but considering this is just a draft and the inclusion of the supporting articles and links that give a great continuation of information, leaving it as is could suffice. This is an impressive start to new page and kudos to you for starting a new subject page entirely!

I love that you included a section on legislation, its gives a great in site on what has been done to protect the Marine environment and ocean already. I think including information on the recent experimenting and acts "deep sea mining" and the lack of regulations in place could be a good addition. There is a lack of information on the subject because of the controversy but I think there is still enough to support the subject in this article. As well as the ANWR oil drilling policy that was passed recently by our administration.

Sources seem all very recent and reliable!

Amazing job! I think this is a very important page to have on Wiki!