User:Fadude/Makruh/EthanKoe Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Fadude


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Fadude/Makruh?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that overall this article draft is great. I think that the lead does and really good job of introducing what the topic is, and I especially like the definition in the lead section. I think that the content that you present in the article is very well written and stays true to what wikipedia wants since there is no bias present whatsoever. I also think that all the sources that you have are up to date and reliable and it is good that you have so many. Overall great job!