User:FaeBee/"Miss Grief"/Jsnarr Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jsnarr


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:FaeBee/"Miss Grief"
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
Still needs lead and more depth in other sections.

The content is presented well, relevant, and organized. The topic does fall under a under represented population and time period of female authors. Woohoo!

All info is neutral. With more info, I'm sure it will be balanced.

Your sources are formatted weird. There is no hyperlink like it should be. There is a cite button at the top when you are in edit mode. I can help you if you need.

Overall, this is a good start!