User:Fairyzizi/Queerbaiting/Yanexi0103 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Fairyzizi)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Queerbaiting


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Queerbaiting

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello User.

Positives:

Overall, your contributions were very unbiased. When noting a statement like when regarding subtext you stated that fans were the ones who viewed this tactic as "perpetuating LGBT marginalization".

Your mention of Hay's code was interesting and not something I would typically find linking to Queerbaiting, but it relates to the misleading of the concept.

Negatives:

Maybe give more information about how subtext and Hays code are confusing and can get mixed up. Maybe give examples or quotes regarding the confusion.