User:Faith.barnhill/Extensive reading/TeachTESOL Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Faith.barnhill


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Faith.barnhill/Extensive_reading?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template#cite_note-:4-5


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Extensive reading

Lead
The proposed changes to the lead would make this section much more concise and easier to understand. The introductory sentence concisely and clearly describes the article's topic. There are reliable sources provided for all claims made. The editor may want to briefly mention the article's major sections, unless these sections are also in need of editing or restructuring.

Content
The proposed section to be added, 'Tenets and Benefits', clearly describes the eight tenets of ER, and uses up-to-date sources. The editor may want to also describe the benefits of ER, as this section mainly focuses on the tenets so far. The added visual is helpful to understanding the benefits of ER, which should also be explained in paragraph form, and be supported by reliable sources.

Tone and Balance
The proposed lead section and proposed 'Tenets and Benefits' section present findings in a straightforward manner with a neutral tone. However, if there is research suggesting that ER is not an effective language learning practice, it may be worth briefly mentioning this in the lead section as well.

Sources and References
The sources used are current and reputable, and reflect the claims made in the proposed changes. The editor may want to expand on this list of sources, particularly when discussing the benefits of ER. They may also want to diversify the sources used to discuss the tenets of ER, if possible.

Organization
The proposed content is well-written and easy to understand, with minimal grammatical errors (quizes -> quizzes). The information is well-organized thus far, and I expect the editor plans on adding another paragraph on the benefits of ER after the paragraph on tenets.

Images and Media
The image added to the 'Tenets and Benefits' section relates well to the topic of the section. The image has a good, descriptive caption and adheres to Wikipedia's copyright regulations.