User:Fall2022/Jim Hopper (Stranger Things)/Osterhc1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Fall 2022


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Jim Hopper (Stranger Things)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Jim Hopper (Stranger Things)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Content


 * The first paragraph/sentence to the article is a very brief summary of Jim Hopper. More generic information that would entice the reader could cause them to read into his Biography.
 * Think about adding background on David Harbour (that actor that plays him)
 * There should be more information referring to specific episodes and possibly a character progression throughout the show
 * A fictional character's backstory should be included in more detail. Sara's death was included, but what else happened to Hopper?
 * Increase the detail in the episodes he is featured in as right now there are only two (scroll to bottom of page)

Sources

When referring to sources, there is very little evidence and variety. There are a total of 17 sources and based on the descriptiveness of the article, more sources could/should be discovered. There are missing references as some statements have no background.


 * Check out some of the sources... some seem a little biased, but sources can be difficult to find when doing a fictional charcater

Organization


 * Very organized by season, but there is room for improvement as the article lacks information.
 * Add a section for Hopper's character's back-story and a section designate to the actor behind the character.
 * Add a section concerning the show's background/summary