User:Fantasyreader22/Power distance/Rainbowsquid33 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Fantasyreader22


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Fantasyreader22/Power_distance?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Power distance

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead does a good job of being clear and to the point right off the bat. It is easily understood and accurately depicts the rest of the article. There aren't any images that would help in the comprehension of power distance. Perhaps a photo of a monarchy would help with the explanation. There are many sources within this article, and they vary in date. I don't believe the age of the sources affects the tone of the article or its understanding as the practice of power distance can be traced back to the 60's, according to the article itself. Overall, I believe the article is well organized and doesn't contain any grammatical or syntax errors that would make it hard for the reader to comprehend the meaning.