User:FaridaElsefary/Islamic Heritage of Hyderabad/Moaazlafi Peer Review

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FaridaElsefary
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Lead
The lead section has caught my attention. It is well-organized and engaging, enticing the reader to continue reading the article in full. It provides important and necessary information about the city succinctly and effectively.

Content
The content is generally very good, especially for non-specialists. It provides a general overview of the historical buildings in Hyderabad. However, I think it needs more organization and should not be limited to describing historical buildings in the city. The title of the article suggests a portrayal of the city's heritage, which naturally extends beyond its historical buildings alone. Additionally, historical buildings alone do not fully represent the city.

I believe the article needs a structured and historical description of the city's heritage, focusing on the architectural styles that characterized it. By this, I mean the city's history and heritage should be the main focus of the article, with examples of these buildings provided along with brief description. The historical buildings should not be the primary focus of the article. However, overall, it presents a very good overview of the important historical buildings in the city.

Tone and Balance
The tone and balance are neutral and completely unbiased. I also believe it adheres to Wikipedia's article standards.

Sources and References
The Sources and References are good, and they are diverse. They include academic, which adhere to academic methodology, ensuring their impartiality and neutrality.

Organization
The current organization of the article seems good; however, it could be enhanced by adopting an approach that makes the city's heritage the central focus. This can be achieved by using examples and illustrations from historical buildings to elucidate the broader heritage. Such an approach would enrich the context and help guide the reader to a deeper understanding of the city's cultural heritage.

Images and Media
The Images are very good; I don't think the article needs more of them.

Overall impressions
Overall, I had a positive impression of the article, as it provided me with new and valuable information about the historical buildings in Hyderabad.