User:FaridaElsefary/Islamic Heritage of Hyderabad/N hatem2001 Peer Review

General info
Farida ElSerafy
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Islamic Heritage of Hyderabad - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The "About" section of the article was a great lead into the core content of the article and provided a brief about what to expect reading about in the article. This is important to offer the reader something like an abstract for the article to check if what he’s looking for is in this article or not. Great job, Farida.

Content

The history section provides most of the content directly related to the title of the article. Maybe just expand on that section.

Tone and balance

The article was explained with a neutral tone. Not biased at all. For the Jami and Mecca masjid, there was a brief about them given just the establisher and some architectural significant details about each one of them in addition to a picture. I like that a lot.

Sources and References

You have already added enough resources to the article. The citation is correct.

Organization

The hierarchy of organizations provides a smooth reading experience for the reader. Maybe use Grammarly to check for any grammatical errors. Refer to the first sentence of Qutb Shahi Tombs.

Images and media

I see you used an image for most of the sections, which grabs the attention of the reader, especially those who are visual learners.

Overall impression

Thank you for the interesting article. This article looks like a professional Wikipedia article. Great Job, Farida. Keep going.