User:FaridaElsefary/Islamic Heritage of Hyderabad/SherifaOsman Peer Review

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Thanks Farida for the article.

A very interesting and concise overview in the "About" section, that introduces the reader to area he/she is about to explore. The language used is straight forward and coherent, as well as the organization of the article if easy to be followed, However, it would really help if there were visuals added to the side of the paragraphs, just to help in connecting the information with the reality. The tone of the writer is unbiased and the references are available in the article and in their associated section.