User:Farrahmarie/Social media marketing/Sean4or Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Farrahmarie, Mfk14, Bellabaird, Ambergrzy, Alessia Scaturchio, Lizzlarson


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Farrahmarie/Social_media_marketing?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Social media marketing

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

No notes for peer review as no draft was submitted in the sandbox at the time of writing. Will return to peer review once draft is included in sandbox.

Some ideas... reading the current article, the "Platforms" section with information regarding "social media platforms" and "mobile phones" can be cut, updated, or removed entirely. Instead, you could link to an article about social media. I'd recommend that "Nike: Make It Count" should be listed as a bullet point alongside other examples of campaigns instead of receiving its own section. Instead of one section focusing on social media marketing in sport, you could have a section detailing social media marketing within different industries, and have sports as one of them. Overall, there's a lot of opportunity for this article to be reorganized and updated.