User:Fatfrog69/Adirondack Architecture/BryceKubasta Peer Review

General info
Fatfrog69
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Adirondack Architecture - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really admired the work that was created, there is valuable information that helps me comprehend Adirondack Architecture with a deeper understanding. The content is not only relevant to the topic and was intricately detailed. I think the article and the paragraphs about the camps and style, were well detailed and informative giving newcomers with insightful information about the architecture and its various uses. I see this article as clear and easy to read allowing viewers a quick read for those seeking background information. Everything is well organized and keeps the ready engaged, along with the new information brings light to how this architecture is used throughout history. I believe the strength of this article is the detail it provides on the architecture, using history, logic of the homesteaders' reasons, and being able to show progression of time that this architecture incorporates.

Things that could be addressed with the Adirondack Camps:


 * Your transition when talking about temporary open-air structures to semi-permanent canvas tents on wooden platforms was a little shaky, maybe tighten it up
 * What lead this evolution?
 * I think some more context on the demand for logging camps and how they evolved into more permanent structures.
 * You could also consider Including information on the architectural features of commercial camps and how they differentiated themselves from other lodging options.

I think a topic about the Elements would be beneficial:


 * You did describe the materials used, yet maybe try using more detail in this section by explaining how these elements contribute to the rugged and rustic appearance of Adirondack Architecture.
 * Offer specific instances or elaborate on how the design integrates various elements such as whole, split, or peeled logs, bark, and roots.