User:FatimahB/Social monogamy in mammalian species/Schanpong Peer Review

General info
FatimahB
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:FatimahB/Social monogamy in mammalian species
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Social monogamy in mammalian species

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: Overall Fatima has a great lead! Did a good job of combining the important parts from the previous lead of the original article. One thing I would add is more citations in the lead (providing great information but no citation for some parts).

Content: Topics for content seem good and interesting. They are at a good starting point but need some more information. Could go into more detail about how the hypotheses came about and some evidence of each in nature. Maybe include examples of species for each sub headline to provide readers with a better understanding of the two hypotheses.

Tone and Balance: Great job and keeping a neutral tone!

Sources and references: Great citations!

Organization: Content is easy to read and follow!

Overall: Overall great job! Great start, but would ensure that all information that is being added has the appropriate citation following. Content is off to a good start but definitely needs more information on what the hypothesis are. Could include information on how they came about and how they are seen in nature, and like I said previously, maybe provide examples of each.