User:Fatimas1937/Parenting/Agnewl Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Fatimas1937


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Parenting - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Within the section of the article that dissects the varying styles of parenting, I noticed that there was not a description regarding the overbearing, overprotective, or "helicopter" style of parenting. I believe this is a vital parenting style that should be included. Furthermore, I feel the "Adults" section of the "Parenting" article can be expanded. For instance, elaborating on the role of the parent/s as their child is now the caregiver. What would that type of parenting be called or how would it transpire. Overall the article very thoroughly outlines all aspects of parenting. The images are well placed and have vivid, descriptive captions. The article remained neutral throughout its entirety. -Agnewl