User:Fatoumou/Afrobeat/75ridercarmen Peer Review

General info
Claratin.nondrowsy, Deldajant, Fatoumou, Isha0323, JpAlbany, Paris154, Rachealbrooks22
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Afrobeat
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Afrobeat

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead section for the article does a good job at introducing the topic of the article and giving a good overview. The content within the article is neutral however, the content could be a little more balanced and focus a little more on Afrobeat rather than  Fela Kuti. The article could also use more footnote citations for the information presented. The last paragraph of the History section does not have any footnote citations to indicate where the information came from. The article is well written for the most part, however there is one grammatical error that I noticed in the first sentence of the third paragraph in the History section. The images are well captioned and are laid out in a visually appealing way. Lastly, the edits added by my peers improve the quality of the article, but I would suggest adjusting the balance between Fela Kuti information and information on Afrobeat.~

This article is fairly written and does provide good information on the topic in an appropriate toned manner. One thing I id notice though was that a lot of the information was placed everywhere so some organization could do the paper some good.