User:FawnTail/Sheltered instruction/Corina.m.feist Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

FawnTail


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:FawnTail/Sheltered instruction
 * Sheltered instruction

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello!

This is an excellent draft! All of your information is accurate, and the citations and links all work. I would recommend putting information about what sheltered instruction as a practice is, so you can link it to SIOP itself. SIOP builds on the instruction practices IN sheltered instruction, and adding that portion will help clarify that information. Otherwise, your article is very thorough, thoughtful, and neutral. Your information is all accurate, and updated.