User:FawnTail/Sheltered instruction/Lreese92 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jennifer Farmer


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:FawnTail/Sheltered_instruction?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sheltered instruction

1.How much scholarly evidence did the group use on the page?

·      Did they include at least three in-text citations? There are many in-text citations.

·      What was the quality of the references? References are very strong.

·      Were summaries from the reference appropriate? (no plagiarism!) The information was precise and to the point. It demonstrates how the SIOP model should be implemented overall and how it should be utilized. I noticed that you only cited one piece of information from source 6, which pertains to key vocabulary. I was wondering if you could add to this feature. Could it maybe be explained why or how this could be implemented? I really like how you added the section about culturally responsive teaching.

2.How effectively did the group incorporate visuals into the page?

·      I really liked the word map that you added for your visual. I thought this could be used through all grade levels. I liked your alphabet manipulative for elementary students, but was wondering if you could add something for middle or high school level students?

3.How well written was the page?

Grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure

·      Little to no errors.

Was the page written in a way that made it accessible for the public? (No jargon)

·      I was wondering why the information at the top of the article is larger and in bold? I was also wondering if maybe the order should go component number and then what the component is. For example, component #2- building background. Also wondering if there should be some sort of wrap up after you explain component 8 and dive into culturally responsive teaching. Overall, I think it is very user friendly and well organized.