User:Fdemi8/Glass octopus/Ep0904 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Fdemi8


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Fdemi8/Glass_octopus?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Glass octopus

Evaluate the drafted changes
- You have reliable sources

- continue to making changes

- add pictures if you can find any

-keep it organized and focus on making it sound more simple so others understand it