User:Fdemi8/Glass octopus/Redoctopus14 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Fdemi8


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Fdemi8/Glass_octopus?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Glass octopus

Evaluate the drafted changes
Includes useful information that is easy to identify and added important resources and references.