User:FeldronIberus/Thomas Melville (writer)/Unknownusername2000 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

FeldronIberus


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
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Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The information in the section based off the lead has some explanation, but needs more information to build off from the lead. More specifically, there is little writing on Catonsville Nine.

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 * Maryknoll


 * Father Jim Curtin
 * Sin Miguel Acatan
 * Pope John
 * Cabrican and Peten

How does he fit into liberation theology, what evidence can you pull that shows his work? When use someone full name once, use your the last name in the rest of the writing. For example, after using mentioning Father Gerbermann. Also writing "he" instead of Gerbermann's full name as well. The writing is very specific needs to narrowed down. One specific topic has a few sentences that could be talked about in a couple sentences. An example in the section is Melville's relationship with Father Gerbermann

The information that is presented needs to be cited and properly cited. The sources already listed need to be placed in the references list as well.

I believe it needs more sources, try and find 3-5 sources. Find some possible information that shows How he fit into liberation theology.

What evidence can you pull that shows his work? I bet if you look up “Thomas Melville and liberation theology” in the school library database you might be able to find some stuff.