User:FeliceRCLi/Traditional Chinese medicine/Miafclark Peer Review

General info
Felice
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:FeliceRCLi/Traditional Chinese medicine:Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Traditional Chinese medicine

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Lead: both leads clearly state what the content is about

Content: the content included is super interesting. I think that additions you included to the section on gender gave a perspective in TCM that probably wasn't talked as much. I think its really important to include this information on wiki. All of the content is very clear and comprehensive. The way you explained pulse diagnostic and mental health in TCM made it very easy to understand.

Tone and Balanced: Nothing seems to be unbiased

Sources and References: I think you could include an in text citation after the first sentence of the seven emotions, just so readers can clearly see where that information comes from. There is also a lot of sources which shows variety in your project, making it stronger. Source 10 looks like it might be a primary source. Other than that they look good.

Organization: Like I mentioned above, your work is very clear and concise.

Images and Media: n/a

Overall, I think you project is really strong and provides a lot of interesting material