User:Fensk110/Green sulfur bacteria/Bixle023 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Fensk110


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Fensk110/Green_sulfur_bacteria?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that the list of things to do/fix to the article is a great start. The characteristics sections of the article draft shows detailed information about green sulfur bacteria. The habitat section is also very detailed. I think the examples provided of the habitats were thoroughly written and fit the section well. I think that the paragraph at the end starting with "One type of green sulfur bacteria, Chlorobium tepidum," seems a little out of place, so adding/incorporating this into the section more would be nice. I think this is a great start to the wiki page and with the list of things you have yet to do, it will be a very solid page. There are just a few minor grammar changes to be done, like subscripting H2S and italicizing Chlorobium tepidum.