User:Fensk110/Green sulfur bacteria/Board073 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Fensk110


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Fensk110/Green_sulfur_bacteria?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Green sulfur bacteria

Evaluate the drafted changes
You need to update the Lead still now after making your changes. I think the Lead could also just use more background info- their biomass, habitats, population numbers, how long they've been around? The planned edits for habitat and characteristics loos good. You already plan on making a lot of good changes, I would just work on extracting the info from sources so you can add more to your sandbox. Also need a description sentence of all the contents within the article.