User:Fensk110/Green sulfur bacteria/Emma113144 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Fensk110


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Fensk110/Green_sulfur_bacteria?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists
 * Green sulfur bacteria

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi! I checked out your sandbox and it looks like the information and sentences you have are really good they just need to be put into a solid paragraph. I looked at your article progress and I was able to see the actual paragraphs you have written. In the fourth paragraph of your habitat section you have "green layer" in quotes which is fine, but seems a bit odd to me unless there's not actually a green layer on the coral. Your phylogeny section is well-written, professional, and informative. Same for your sulfur metabolism section. Well done!!