User:Fensk110/Green sulfur bacteria/Metikatic Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Green Sulfur Bacteria


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Fensk110/Green_sulfur_bacteria?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Green sulfur bacteria

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

- I liked how you guys have your outline ready to go and how you are still working on that

- The lead section will be great as you said to include different ways of carbon fixation section that you will talk about especially for non-stem related majors is a good point. The fact that you are finding ways to cater it to other groups of people is well thought of.

- Improvement to add on is to make sure to have your reference list so that it doesn't get lost.

-Make sure to also explain more of the different abbreviation so it is clear for us.

-The set up and the direction is looking good

-Make sure to check minor grammar issues like spelling

- One potential thing you could also add on in your lead and probably expand on in your main body is human level affect and different kinds of effects on the Green Sulfur

- Would like to know more about why should we care about Green sulfur and what are the impacts it has so elaborating on that is important

- This is to say there needs to be a directionality as to where the article is going

- Provide images as you see fit

-One thing I have emphasize adding is a biogeochemical in the news somewhere in the article as to how it is related to us now, or what is known about it currently.

-How does climate change affect these types of bacteria?

-Consider also adding in different animals affected by this bacteria.

- In general talk more about the major impact it is facing.