User:Fensk110/Green sulfur bacteria/Pmbdanni Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Fensk110


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Green sulfur bacteria

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like how you've begun to write out what you would like to work on for your article. The different sections you mentioned in the original article are fairly limited and could definitely use additional information and citations. I also like how you would like to make some of the information more accessible to a wider audience. I wonder if more could be added to the "Mixotrophy in green sulfur bacteria" and "Nitrogen fixation" sections as well. Do you have a working bibliography yet? It looks like there are quite a few sources for the original article already, but are they reliable? I wonder if you could find a better image for green sulfur bacteria that doesn't include glare like the image that is being used now has.