User:FernandaDurazo/User:ArmandoCSUSB/Charles Gillam Sr./FernandaDurazo Peer Review

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Topic sentence is straight forward and describes what the article is about, a wood carver. It is however missing a bibliography and section headings that make it easy to find information. It is very short and it could use more elaboration to give more information about the artist. There are more than two sources which is good, however they do not appear to be reliable sources that are credible.