User:Fernandesi/Lake Fryxell/BenBri Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Fernandesi

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Fernandesi/Lake_Fryxell?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead
The lead for the ecology section is good and sets up what the section will be about and the lack of oxygen.

Content
The content is all relevant to topic, the organisms are all relevant to the lake ecology. This is missing content but since its the rough draft it's not that big of a deal. All of the sections are informative and relevant to the topic of the sandbox.

Tone and Balance
It is neutral and there was no bias.

Sources and References
All the sources are reliable and up to date. Everything in the article is cited.

Organization
The article flows good, it starts with talking about anoxic regions, then talking about the organisms within the lake. There were no spelling errors in the

Images and Media
There were no pictures in the article