User:Fernandesi/Lake Fryxell/Wiki limno Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Fernandesi


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Fernandesi/Lake Fryxell


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lake Fryxell

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Bunny, Lizzy here. Nice job on the first draft, I like how you broke up the research you found into different headings. My biggest suggestion going forward would be to add more details to these sections so that the reader can really understand the research. Remember, Wikipedia is a general audience so linking to other articles (which you did) and detailed explanations will be your friend.