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Planned plot fixes
-necklace is *not* the 'heart of the ocean' -> the necklace *contains* the 'heart of the ocean' diamond (as a diamond pendant)

-nude woman is wearing *only* the diamond necklace/pendant

-Rose's mother *manages* to get aboard a lifeboat

-Jack a 'drifter and artist' -> *penniless* artist

-the party is in third class, not 'on third class deck'

-on-board -> 'on board' or aboard

-salvage vessel -> research vessel the Keldysh

-indicate Rose calls herself Rose Dawson in memory of Jack Dawson, calls herself Rose Dawson Calvert as wife of Mr. Calvert

-attracts attention of lifeboat -> of Lowe

-Rose lives a free and adventurous life -> lives a life of freedom and adventure

-"In order to get into a lifeboat, Cal carries a lost child in his arms"

David F (talk) 22:15, 2 June 2013 (UTC)

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