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Article evaluation:
This is where I will leave notes about my observations.

I am using three sources from my annotated bibliography midterm to create a paragraph to contribute to the "social change" section of the hip-hop feminism page. So far I have used two of these sources.

Notes for improvement:

 * Come up with key concepts based on sources
 * Be sure on rules on paraphrasing

Draft edit:
Music artists, as they are in the public eye, have the ability to be influential social figures. Between social media and fanbases, music artists can influence and represent social movements. Social media is a powerful medium for social change to be performed and seen. It can reach and influence people of all ages and locations. Music artists can utilize social media platforms to express perspectives on social change in positive ways, despite what motivates them to do so. For several decades, Hip Hop has served as a multipurpose medium to rap and sing about social change, but talking about it on social media outlets nowadays is common too. Participation in Black Lives Matter has been one of the most prevalent forms of social change exemplified by artists in the industry. These movements gain momentum because of the wide audience reached due to fanbase followings on social media. Social change becomes active when it is heard and seen by younger generations.

Editing task:
I plan on contributing to "Hip hop as a medium for social change" within "Feminist activism in hip hop", which will be contributed to "Hip-hop feminism".