User:FeyUnlocked/Burkholderia Gladioli/Starryoung Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cody Funk


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Draft/Cody Funk


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Burkholderia gladioli

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * 1) Information is stated clearly and objectively. Good use of resources.
 * 2) Maybe giving a general idea of Chowdhury and Heinemann's experiment would be helpful.
 * 3) Needs more information and details in the section. Seems a little bit to brief.
 * 4) I think I can define the words that I use in my section as this article edit has done.