User:FeyUnlocked/Viral envelope/Princessslayerr Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

FeyUnlocked and Boom4Life


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:FeyUnlocked/Viral_envelope?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Viral envelope

Evaluate the drafted changes
The sources used for the references were reliable sources. However, there is a claim in the original article that lacks a source and this should be rectified. The sentence pertaining to vaccination seemed out of place in the article as there was no other mention about vaccination. The sentence added, “The capsid, having a focused role of protecting the genome in addition to immune recognition evasion (Stuart 2019).” fits very well into the article and adds to the topic, but needs a grammar correction. I believe it is supposed to say, “The capsid has a focused role of protecting the genome in addition to immune recognition evasion.” The sentence, “Glycoproteins mediate the interaction between virion and host cell, typically initiating the fusion between the two. (Navaratnarajah)” requires more explanation for a normal reader so as to explain what this has to do with enveloped viruses. Also, I only see 5 sentences total when the minimum is 8. Other than that, the sources look good and the content will be good with a few tweaks. Two of the sources were pretty dated, 2008 and 1992. The added content is unbiased.