User:Fikiki123/Water quality law/Kolvera Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Fikiki123/Water quality law


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Fikiki123/Water_quality_law?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

As of right now, there is no lead to offer an introduction which should be included eventually. The content of this article is up-to-date and presents relevant content to the topic. It also does deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps and addresses it properly. The content is also definitely neutral as it does not try to persuade readers to believe an overrepresented or underrepresented side of the topic. The content in the article clearly reflects what is cited in the sources below. Some of the sources are current and others are not, but this may be reflective of the ways in which water quality laws have progressed. I think that the content added is concise, but the part about international law could be a little more descriptive or better organized. It provides great information in a neutral manner though. The last sentence of the first paragraph about dumping bans also has a grammatical error that needs to be fixed. I think that the article's only image is a good way of visualizing dumping bans that enhances the reader's understanding of the topic. Maybe another image would be helpful, but finding images that adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations is difficult. Overall, I think that the article is good, neutral, and balanced. Although Fikayo is starting this article from scratch, she is doing a good job. I think that her second part about international laws could use more citations and information from secondary sources. Other than that, Fikayo is capable and good at writing a Wikipedia article.

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