User:Fillmann/Evaluate an Article

Evaluate an article
This is where you will complete your article evaluation. Please use the template below to evaluate your selected article.


 * Name of article: (Circumpolar deep water)
 * Briefly describe why you have chosen this article to evaluate.
 * it is undeveloped, so should be easy to work with and find errors.

Lead

 * Guiding questions


 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
 * yes
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
 * no, other than the introduction it does not have any.
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
 * yes, briefly mentions the CDW creation process, but does not expand on it at all
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?
 * concise but definitely underdeveloped

Content

 * Guiding questions


 * Is the article's content relevant to the topic?
 * yes
 * Is the content up-to-date?
 * yes, but could use more references
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
 * Definitely a lot of missing content.
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?
 * no

Tone and Balance

 * Guiding questions


 * Is the article neutral?
 * mostly neutral, but it needs more references to make sure the statements are scientific fact, and no personal prespectives.
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * no, but needs more references
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * no, but needs more references
 * Does the article attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?
 * no, but needs more references

Sources and References

 * Guiding questions


 * Are all facts in the article backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
 * not all
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
 * of those provided yes, but again needs more sources/explanation
 * Are the sources current?
 * Relatively yes
 * Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?
 * yes/no
 * Check a few links. Do they work?
 * yes

Organization

 * Guiding questions


 * Is the article well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
 * no its underdeveloped and need further work
 * Does the article have any grammatical or spelling errors?
 * no
 * Is the article well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?
 * no comprises of an introduction, but even this text should likely be broken up into different sections

Images and Media

 * Guiding questions


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * none, definitely need some
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * none
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * none
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?
 * none

Checking the talk page

 * Guiding questions


 * What kinds of conversations, if any, are going on behind the scenes about how to represent this topic?
 * not any that I can find
 * How is the article rated? Is it a part of any WikiProjects?
 * yes part of the WkikProject Oceans and Limnology and Oceanography
 * How does the way Wikipedia discusses this topic differ from the way we've talked about it in class?
 * In class, we usually have well-developed topics with supporting theories/subtopics and adequate referencing. Again this article is undeveloped and needs more references, more relation to other wiki articles, and entirely just more information on the topic.

Overall impressions

 * Guiding questions


 * What is the article's overall status?
 * stub and low-importance
 * What are the article's strengths?
 * It does provide some linkage to other prominent articles.
 * How can the article be improved?
 * Deep information explaining how and why the CDW exits, expand on its defining characteristics and influences, and needs more diagrams/images.
 * How would you assess the article's completeness - i.e. Is the article well-developed? Is it underdeveloped or poorly developed?
 * underdeveloped but has potential

Optional activity

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