User:Finesslyn/Colonial Heights, Virginia/E.Michelle.70 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Finesslyn


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Finesslyn/Colonial_Heights,_Virginia?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Colonial Heights, Virginia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead


 * the user hasn't updated the lead section. they are focused on the geography and more detailed facts sections currently.
 * currently, the lead describes briefly what the article is about and does not include any information that isn't covered late in the article.

Content


 * the content that the user has added is relevant and update to date on the topic.
 * as of right now I don't see any content that the user has added that does not belong in the article.

Tone and Balance


 * the content added is neutral and does not show signs of any bias opinions
 * I didn't see any view points that overrepresented in the article
 * all of the content they added is factual and steers clear of persuasive actions

Sources and References


 * All the new information has secondary sources to back it up
 * All of the links for the sources work and reflect the information added to the article
 * these links and sources seem to be up to date on the information and written by a variety of people with factual sources and articles themselves

Organization


 * all the added work is easy to read and organized neatly in their sandbox
 * I didn't see any errors in grammar in their work
 * they broke down their additions into easy to understand sections of the article that are clear to a reader and fit well in the articles set up

Overall impressions


 * the content the user has added has benefited the article and added really good information.
 * the organization if the draft is a big strength in this sandbox. the break down in the geography is really useful and adds a lot to the original work. I also think the new section on economy adds helpful information that wasn't previously there.
 * continue to reflect on each section and add points that expand on the article in a helpful/ useful way for the understanding of Colonial Heights.