User:Finn0018/Four Men and a Prayer/Karsonpotts Peer Review

Peer Review

 * When you read the plot description, can you follow the story of the movie? Note any parts that were confusing to you.
 * Easy to read.
 * "Taking what little they know" ... could be worded different, maybe "With what little..."
 * Are there internal wiki links to all relevant actors, production personnel, historical entities or  events?
 * Yes. On the box on the side with credits - possibly could be more links
 * Are there citations for any facts that do NOT come from watching the movie itself?
 * Yes. Print the Legend: The Life and Times of John Ford. Also external links. Do you see any grammatical issues that the writer should correct?
 * No. Any other comments on the entry?
 * Plot is good, just needs a 'reception' section. Maybe bibliography + references needs to be combined

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