User:FinnMal/Tupi people/Jimmycarp Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

FinnMal


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:FinnMal/Tupi people


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Tupi people

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good start to editing. Uses a reliable primary source as a citation. Information is relevant to the article provides extra information on the colonization of the Tupi people. Could provide more in-depth information regarding how the Tupi people were assimilated into Catholicism. The edit maintains a neutral pov, and doesn't seem biased towards any position. For future edits, it would be good to reference up to date secondary sources and scholarship on the topic alongside secondary sources.