User:Fionaslagter/Wildlife rehabilitation/Mtstace Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Fionaslagter


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Fionaslagter/Wildlife_rehabilitation?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Wildlife rehabilitation

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your sources seem to be very good secondary sources. They don't seem to show any major bias from what I have seen and they don't seem to provide original primary research. In reviewing your article draft, the only problem I found was that in the first paragraph you have in your sandbox, "and" should be changed to "are" in the last sentence. Besides this I find that you made valuable contributions that come from a neutral viewpoint and meet the requirements for both the assignment and for Wikipedia's guidelines. I think it was also valuable to add a sentence in that commented more on the goal of the field.