User:Fiondion/Park Rehyun/Sb871423 Peer Review

Lead:

- great lead sentence

Content:

- I divided my article body into sections which may clarify the different aspects of her career and life

Strengths:

- clear and easy to read

- acknowledgment of not only her success as a female Korean artist but also how her success overlapped and interacted with her husband's career

- I added in a section about how my artists work was received, I would be interested to see any information you could find on reception/controversy

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Fionidion


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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
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Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)