User:FishLoaf/Bob Moses (activist)/TempE404 Peer Review

General info
FishLoah
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:FishLoaf/Bob Moses (activist)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Bob Moses (activist)

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Overall, this is a pretty concise edit. If you're going to replace the entire death section, you might want to re-incorporate the Church where the funeral was held. But that is an optional choice. Otherwise, it seems fairly unbiased, straightforward, and relevant to the article.