User:FishMan312/Lycurgus of Sparta/PimpDaddyPeaches Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

FishMan312


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:FishMan312/Lycurgus_of_Sparta?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lycurgus of Sparta

Evaluate the drafted changes
Return to Sparta:

For this paragraph you added citations in places that did need it, since there was none for this entire paragraph.

Beliefs:

You added an entirely new paragraph that was something based on the idea that shaped the entire Spartan society for women.

Currency:

You added some new information that fleshes out the rest of the paragraph in regards to his currency reforms, nice addition.

Common mess halls:

Nothing new added, but you did state that you were planning on it.

Overall:

Good additions to your paragraphs, kept a neutral tone, used a variety of credible sources, and added two new pictures for the article. Overall very well done and it looks on track to be a good article.