User:Fishmansf4/Freshwater ecosystem/Mrb6789 Peer Review

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Fishmansf4
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Evaluate the drafted changes
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I like where you are going with the impact that freshwater ecosystems have on humans. I would suggest going into more depth with the ways that humans rely on in a separate paragraph. You could add hyperlinks instead of parentheses to make it look more professional. You could also elaborate on the 'aquarium trade.'

I also seen on your article that under the "Types" section that part of the first main paragraph is repeated, so you could delete some of that repeated information and continue with the specific types of freshwater ecosystem.